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证明观点的能力 Development
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文章严重缺乏组织和展开
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针对话题任务有限展开
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针对话题完成时所用的解释、细节没有充分展开
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很好的完成任务
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能够完整描述信息,有效针对话题完成任务,适当的描述细节
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语言组织能力与逻辑 Organization
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细节很少,或根本没有、或不相关或存在很大问题
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结构不太清晰或论点之间联系不充分
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体现基本结构关系,偶尔出现观点联系不清
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总体结构清晰,偶尔没必要的离题,重复
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结构清晰,体现出一致、连贯、递进的特点
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语法与词汇的使用 Use of grammar and vocabulary
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句子结构严重错误,包含其他语言,无意义的符号等
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句子语法上存在大量错误
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造句和选词的不熟悉使得文章缺乏清晰度,偶尔意思含混不清
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语言熟练,能使用不同的句法和词汇,存在次要错误
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能够熟练使用句法,合适的错词与习语
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From my perspective, I agree with this idea. Although the statement that life is easier and comfortable today than it was in the past as the environment is better and the competition in the society is less fierce, there are some flaws about this idea. The first flaw is that the environment might be worse than nowadays. With the development of social media, people can have better access to every part of the world by their eye. We can see news from the TVs or phones. In recent years, owe to increasing news about the environment, we are more and more aware that the world pollution has become more serious and we deeply understanding the effect brought by the pollution. With the social concern, not only governments but also people are engaged in protecting the environment. Due to these efforts, the environment become even better than before. The second flaw is that it is more competitive for surviving. In the period that my grandparents were young, they had just passed the period of war. All the things are waiting for being repaired, which means most of the resource will be used in postwar recovery instead of people's life. With limited resource, people have to compete with ours not for a better life, but for survival. The competition will be much more fierce and may even be far beyond imagination. On the contrary, our lives now is much more easier and more comfortable. It have been nearly 1 hundred years after the world war 2. Most of countries have recovered and developed drastically. Instead of improving the strength of nation, many countries turn their eyes on people's life. Thanks to the social security, there is no need for people to concern about the survival. Even though we may lose jobs and have no money, we can still rely on it. The development of technologies like internet has brough not only convenience but also happiness. We can communicate with people from different regions without face-to-face contact or writing letters. Travelling also become more easier. Even planes are available to some of the people. There are also some cheaper alternatives like trains, which enable most of people to travel conveniently. In conclusion, it is a easier and more comfortable world now.
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