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Andrew and Claire present there standpoints of the advantages of museums. Admittedly, a museum could inspire inhabitants and unite people in a common appreciation to some extent. However, considering visiting a museum is a substantial an eye-opening thing, I am inclined to prioritize the advantage of developing people's cognition. From my viewpoint, since we could see numerous valuable remains and artificals which ranges from ancient to modern day, it would considerably abroaden the masses' horizon. In other words, we could open our eyes just around hometown, which would deepen our perspective of the world and develop our values, benefiting our future development. For instance, my cousin Paul, who is just 10 years, while he has more insight viewpoint about living matters than his peers. Having known him for long, I know the reason is that his parent always take him to visit different types of museums.
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Doctor Achebe

Next week, we'll be discussing the role of museums in society, and we'll explore the various contexts, social and otherwise, in which museums operate. Today, I'd like you to think about the benefits of museums. For a city and its residents, what do you think is the most significant advantage of having a museum located in that city? Explain why you think so.

Andrew

Museums can inspire people in many ways. If a city has a museum, people have access to out-of-the-ordinary experiences. Whether in a room with sixteenth-century paintings or some moon rocks, being near fascinating objects from the past transports people out of their everyday lives. It can offer them a new perspective or a sense of possibility in their lives.

Claire

Andrew makes a good point, but personally, I see greater benefit in the social aspect of museum-going. I think the biggest advantage of having a museum nearby is that people can come together for events like exhibitions and lectures or to volunteer. Museums foster a sense of community in a city. They can unite people in a common appreciation of something.

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  • From my perspective, museums serve as valuable educational resources for people of all ages. To be specific, they offer a tangible connection to history, science, art, and culture, providing a unique learning experience that cannot be replicated in a classroom or through digital media. This hands-on learning can be particularly beneficial for students, enhancing their understanding and appreciation of various subjects. For example, my cousin, a high school student, recently visited a history museum on a school field trip. This experience brought her history lessons to life. She saw artifacts and exhibits that vividly portrayed different eras, deepening her understanding of historical events. The visit sparked her interest in cultures and civilizations she had only read about in textbooks, proving how museums can enrich education by providing real-world context and interactive learning opportunities.


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5 - 6 25 分以上
3 - 4 18 - 24 分
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