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Today, we’re going to discuss the ways in which companies can impact society. In your opinion, what is the best way for a company to have a positive impact on society?

Sarah

I believe that companies should focus on their own operations. While charitable giving can be beneficial, it is a temporary fix that doesn’t address the root causes of serious social and environmental problems. By doing business in more responsible ways, companies can have a more meaningful and lasting impact on society. Not only that, but if they attract positive attention from consumers and increase their profits because of their actions they will inspire other companies to do the same. That’s the only way we can really fix society.

John

I disagree with Sarah. While those are very good points, I think that companies should focus on charitable giving and philanthropy. Charitable giving can provide immediate relief to those in need and contribute to the overall well-being of society right away. It could take years or decades for business changes to have a positive impact on society, and most people just can’t wait that long. For instance, donating money to a school can help students learn more effectively almost immediately.

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  • From my perspective, corporations have the capability to effect a deeper and more enduring societal impact through responsible business practices. I fully endorse Sarah's view that mere charitable donations act as a band-aid solution to social and environmental issues. I would go further to suggest that businesses can make a significant societal contribution by investing in educational and training programs. This could encompass offering scholarships to students, apprenticeship programs, or ongoing education opportunities for their workforce. By providing such opportunities, businesses can assist individuals in enhancing their skills, boosting their job prospects, and possibly playing a part in narrowing the gap of income inequality.

     

    While Sarah correctly highlights the immediate benefits of charitable contributions to society's welfare, it's critical to acknowledge that a heavy reliance on such donations could inadvertently deter individuals from addressing the fundamental causes of social and environmental challenges. This potential dependence might obstruct sustained efforts towards achieving lasting change.

     

    In conclusion, it is my strong conviction that businesses should focus on optimizing their operations to make a substantial impact on society.


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1. E-rater 是ETS在托福考试中真实使用的写作机评系统,具有很高的参考价值。因真实的考试中还有人类评分的环节,因此机器评分不能简单等同于最终的考试分数

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机评分数 参考成绩
5 - 6 25 分以上
3 - 4 18 - 24 分
1 - 2 17 分以下