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In my opinion, I totally support to choose to protect the environment, as it will not only closely assist with our real-world life but facilitate the improvement of social economy in other ways.
First of all, shifting towards more environmentally friendly economic practices will be more crucial for economic development. As we all know that private companies are mostly profit-driven, and they are very care about financial-incentives influence their revenue. If the government take out some effect such as fines and taxes to punish them for polluting environment, they must act very quickly to transfer their ways of production to more environmentally friendly ones.
Secondly, some may claim that protecting environment hurt business, especially the smaller ones, who are not able to make money. However, government can use the money to subsidize companies and institutes to search for newer and safer of productions, decreasing the burden of economic and in the meantime benefiting the long-term sustainability of environmental protection.
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Today we’re going to talk about the debate between economic growth and protecting the environment. Economic growth creates new jobs and gives people money they can use to improve their lives. On the other hand, if we protect the environment it can be enjoyed both by ourselves and future generations. If you had to choose between prioritizing economic growth or protecting the environment, which one would you choose. Why?

Alex

I would prioritize the environment. We only have one planet and if we don’t take care of it, we won’t have pleasant lives in the future. Economic growth can be important, but not at the expense of the environment. I think we need to shift towards more environmentally-friendly economic practices, such as investing in renewable energy and promoting environmentally-friendly technologies. We’ll all live much healthier lives if the world around us is clean.

Maggie

While I agree with Alex that environmental sustainability is important, I think that economic growth is the only way to solve many of the social and economic problems we face. We need a strong economy to create jobs, reduce poverty, and improve standards of living. Not only that, but if companies grow stronger and more profitable, they might eventually develop new technologies that solve our environmental problems.

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  • In my view, the importance of prioritizing environmental protection cannot be overstated. I wholeheartedly concur with Alex's point that focusing solely on economic growth could have negative repercussions on our well-being. I strongly believe that the environment is key in maintaining the Earth's climate balance. Ignoring the need for environmental preservation could result in climatic shifts with profound effects on human communities, natural ecosystems, and the worldwide economy.

     

    Although Maggie highlighted the importance of a robust economy in tackling current socio-economic issues, she overlooked the fact that economic gains often benefit certain groups more than others, exacerbating social inequalities and leaving numerous people behind. It is therefore vital to ensure that economic development is equitable and reaches all societal layers, particularly those who are most at risk.

     

    To conclude, prioritizing environmental conservation is undeniably critical.


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