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In my opinion, Sara is right when she says that remote working is beneficial in terms of flexibility and productivity. First of all, some workers come to their company from far away. It is a waste of time which are crowded with many people in the train. Also, many workers need to hold community, communicate with co-workers, and even work out. It is seriously stressful for them. Secondly, productivity increases at home because it is more comfortable than the office. For example, during COVID-19, I worked from my home. However, I could work freely. In conclusion, I agree with Sara's perspectives because working at home increase flexibility and productivity
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Professor

Today, we’re going to talk about the benefits and drawbacks of remote work. Many companies have implemented remote work policies in the past few years, and many others are considering joining them. Given that this represents a major change in the way we work and interact with each other, companies must carefully consider all relevant details before making a decision. What do you think? Is remote work beneficial, or do you think it’s a bad idea?

Sara

I think remote work is a very positive trend. For one, it reduces the time we spend commuting and it gives employees more flexible schedules. Plus, many people find that they are more productive when working from home. Some people say this is because they aren’t distracted by their coworkers, while others suggest it’s because their energy isn’t drained during a long and bothersome commute. Whatever the reason, it’s clear to me that remote work is a trend that will continue to pick up steam.

Michael

While I can see the benefits of remote work, I don’t think it should become the new normal. There’s something to be said for the atmosphere that comes from being in the same physical space as your colleagues. Plus, remote work can make it harder to build relationships and collaborate effectively. This means it might limit our chances to earn promotions and raises. And what about people who don’t have enough room for a home office? They are going to suffer if this trend continues.

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  • I believe that facilitating remote work is a commendable initiative, echoing Sara's sentiment on its positive impact on work productivity. I further contend that by embracing remote work, employers have the opportunity to tap into a broader and more diverse pool of talent. Remote work removes geographical constraints, enabling companies to hire from anywhere globally. This is especially advantageous for businesses in highly competitive sectors where attracting and retaining elite talent poses a significant challenge.

     

    Although Michael pointed out the difficulties remote work may introduce in forming strong interpersonal connections and effective collaboration, he overlooked the potential of remote teams to overcome these challenges through team-building exercises and virtual social gatherings. Such activities can foster camaraderie, trust, and stronger bonds among team members, regardless of their physical locations.

     

    In summary, I am convinced that it is in the best interest of companies to permit their employees to work remotely from their homes.


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机评分数 参考成绩
5 - 6 25 分以上
3 - 4 18 - 24 分
1 - 2 17 分以下