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This week, we will be looking at how consumers feel about their purchases of technology. Many people find that buying devices such as mobile phones or personal computers can be very difficult. They feel like they're not prepared to make the best decision to suit their needs. In your posts, I want you to discuss the following question: What do you believe is the biggest mistake that people make when buying tech products? Explain what this mistake is.

Claire

I think one problem is that people don't match the product's capabilities to their actual needs. My brother just got a new mobile phone, and he is very excited about how highly rated the camera is. But he hardly ever takes photos. So he paid for a feature that he doesn't really need.

Paul

When people buy a new piece of hardware, like a laptop, they often don't consider the software they are purchasing along with the hardware. If the software is not what you are used to or doesn't work with your existing files, it can be frustrating to learn a new way of using your laptop.

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  • In my view, the most common error people commit when purchasing technology products is allowing brand loyalty or marketing hype to influence their decision without conducting proper research. Often, individuals are drawn to well-known brands or heavily advertised products, mistakenly equating popularity with quality. Although well-established brands frequently provide reliable products, this isn't always true, and there are times when less famous brands might provide better value or features. It's important for consumers to read reviews, compare specifications, and ideally, test various products in stores before finalizing their purchase. For instance, my cousin, swayed by aggressive marketing, chose a high-end laptop from a renowned brand without considering other options. Initially, the brand's prestige seemed promising, but he quickly encountered issues related to battery life and performance. This led him to adopt a more thorough approach for his subsequent purchase. He carefully examined different models, read detailed reviews, and tested several laptops in stores. In the end, he selected a laptop from a lesser-known brand that provided superior performance and longer battery life at a more affordable price.



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1. E-rater 是ETS在托福考试中真实使用的写作机评系统,具有很高的参考价值。因真实的考试中还有人类评分的环节,因此机器评分不能简单等同于最终的考试分数

2. 经过对测试用户写作成绩数据分析,考满分老师为大家提供了 E-rater 与真实考试分数的对应关系,供参考:

原始分数与水平对应关系
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机评分数 参考成绩
5 - 6 25 分以上
3 - 4 18 - 24 分
1 - 2 17 分以下