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I am with Kelly that the the importance of a health living enviromnent is over the economic benefit.

First of all, the pollution of the industries can lead to death. The air quality is so essential that it can determine the lifespan of human because people breathe the air everywhere and everytime. The air pollution from the companies, such as CO2, SO2, can lead serious illness of premature death such as vomiting, heart disease, and cancer. It's clear that air qualtiny is vital to human beings.

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Doctor Gupta

This week, we'll study an issue that is often debated by economists. There are many large industries that, while providing significant economic benefits, engage in practices that result in environmental harm. Some would argue that economic success should never come at the cost of damage to the environment. Do you agree with this view? Why or why not?

Paul

I can't say I agree. Everyone talks about protecting natural resources, but what about protecting humans? Humans need the ability to work and provide for their families, and sometimes this means creating jobs through industries that might contribute to pollution. Those industries can just be monitored by environmental agencies. That's a win-win solution.

Kelly

I see your point, Paul, but I don't think there are many industries that are so essential for the economy that their impact on the environment can be ignored or merely "monitored." Continual environmental damage will one day lead to the extinction of species that are essentials to agriculture. That will endanger our food chain.

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  • From my perspective, economic development should never be achieved at the expense of environmental degradation. This viewpoint aligns with Kelly’s notion that continual environmental damage will have a heavy toll on our food chain. I would like to add that emphasizing environmentally friendly practices can act as a catalyst for innovation, opening up new economic opportunities in the fields of renewable energy and sustainable technologies. This focus can lead to the creation of green jobs, contributing to a workforce skilled in environmentally conscious practices. Such a shift not only supports ecological sustainability but also fosters a more resilient economy, adaptable to the challenges posed by environmental changes and resource limitations.

     

    While Paul pointed out that creating jobs through industries that might lead to pollution is critical, he failed to acknowledge that while creating jobs is vital, the long-term health impact of pollution on workers and surrounding communities can be severe. Health issues related to pollution, such as respiratory diseases, cancers, and heart conditions, can result in high healthcare costs and a decrease in overall quality of life. It’s important to weigh the immediate job creation against potential long-term health costs.

     

    In a word, economic development should never come at the cost of environmental degradation.


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5 - 6 25 分以上
3 - 4 18 - 24 分
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