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Paul presents a compelling argument against integrating such courses into curriculum. Admittedly, soft skills can be hard to evaluate and taught, requiring lots of efforts and resources. However, considering the overall development of students in this fast-paced era, I am inclined to believe soft skills are important and relative courses are of the utmost preference. Soft skills can not only foster communication and cooperation abilities which might can in handy in their professional settings, but also offer a great chance for them to cultivate a healthy mental well-being.
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Doctor Achebe

This week, we'll examine issues in education reform. For example, some educators think that by focusing mainly on foundational knowledge in subjects like reading, math, and science, schools are not fully preparing students for success in the workplace. These educators argue that soft skills — non-academic skills, such as being empathetic or having a strong work ethic — should be part of the curriculum, with classroom time dedicated to developing these skills. Do you agree? Why or why not?

Paul

Soft skills are important, but I don't agree with using classroom time to work on them. I'm not sure how teachers would measure students' progress in developing these skills. If students' progress can't be measured on something being taught, I'm not sure if there's any point to teaching it.

Claire

I agree. While students need a strong foundation in academic subjects, soft skills are important because they affect how well students do their work. If classroom time is set aside for these skills, students will take them seriously and their academic work will benefit. Teachers could design lessons so that students learn about a skill and then do role-playing activities with classmates.

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  • From my perspective, the modern workplace demands more than just technical knowledge or academic prowess. Employers consistently highlight the importance of soft skills such as teamwork, communication, problem-solving, and adaptability. By incorporating these skills into the educational curriculum, schools can better prepare students for success in their future careers. This preparation goes beyond theoretical knowledge, equipping students with the practical skills needed to navigate complex workplace environments, collaborate effectively with others, and contribute positively to their organizations.

     

    While Paul pointed out that it is difficult for teachers to measure students' progress in developing these skills, he failed to acknowledge that education has evolved to include various innovative assessment methods beyond traditional exams and quizzes. Tools such as reflective journals, peer assessments, project-based learning outcomes, and teacher observations can provide valuable insights into students' development in areas like teamwork, communication, and emotional intelligence.

     

    In summary, non-academic skills should be part of the curriculum.


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