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I agree with Paul, and I personally believe that asking real people around us is better way to make a decision during shopping in terms of increbility of the information.

This is because the reviews on the Internet sometimes cannnot be trust. For example, when I checked the reviews of a high-evaluated smartphone, some of the reviews used entirely same phrases. At that time, my father taught me that some companies tend to hire people to post positive reviews on their products, sometimes using template of how to review. Therefore, review on the Internet are sometimes unbelievable.

In contrast, my friends and family usually told me true opinion about the products. Therefore, I usually ask people around me, rather than online information.
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Doctor Achebe

Let's continue talking about consumer behavior. We have been discussing different ways people go about choosing what products to buy, and there are many potential sources of information and advice for consumers. In your opinion, which is the better strategy for making purchasing decisions, relying on advice from friends and family, or depending on information from online sources? Why?

Claire

Asking friends and family members for product recommendations might seem like an easier option, but it might take too much time to get all the information you need. An Internet search would be much more efficient. There are many consumer magazines available online that compile lots of data to compare the advantages and disadvantages of one product versus another.

Paul

The last time l bought a computer, I just watched a few videos online to make a decision, and now I regret that. My friends could have advised me better because they know my preferences and the kind of features that I am interested in. Consumers should get advice from the people around them to find the most suitable products.

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  • From my perspective, advice from friends and family is often perceived as more trustworthy and reliable. Unlike online sources, where information can be influenced by advertising or sponsored content, friends and family typically prioritize your best interests. They offer advice based on their personal experiences and genuine desire to help, which can lead to more satisfactory purchasing decisions.

     

    While online sources can provide vast amounts of information quickly, the abundance of information available online can lead to analysis paralysis. This occurs when a consumer is overwhelmed by choices and data, making it difficult to make a decision. Friends and family can simplify this process by narrowing down options based on their understanding of your values in products, thus streamlining the decision-making process.

     

    In conclusion, turning to friends and family for advice is a better option.


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1. E-rater 是ETS在托福考试中真实使用的写作机评系统，具有很高的参考价值。因真实的考试中还有人类评分的环节，因此机器评分不能简单等同于最终的考试分数

2. 经过对测试用户写作成绩数据分析，考满分老师为大家提供了 E-rater 与真实考试分数的对应关系，供参考：

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机评分数 参考成绩
5 - 6 25 分以上
3 - 4 18 - 24 分
1 - 2 17 分以下