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When it comes to which thing diversitify our life, it is the development of globalization that appears more promising than refute it.
Skeptics of globilization may argue, as Lyndia mentions, the peple will become more willing to focu on their interestin things and ignor other topic. It must be mentioned, however, he ignorant of the fact that this trend give more opportunities for people to discover new things.
It makes much more sense, therefore, to be aligned with ken, who contends globilization is more better. Like what he mentions, the global supply chain like foods, give us a more chances to tests different foods. Additionally, the people can quickly realize what happen on other country and give some help if they need. More importantly, globalization boost our economic circumstance over the world.
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Under the impetus of globalization, there are different views regarding the differences between individuals. On one hand, some people believe that with the development of globalization, there is a gradual enhancement of mutual understanding, leading to a decrease in the differences between people from different countries. On the other hand, there are also those who argue that the differences between individuals are actually becoming greater. What is your perspective on this matter?

Miles

In my opinion, the differences between people are smaller. In today's era of globalization, we can easily purchase food, clothing, and various other products from all around the world. This convenient exchange and trade have led to a gradual reduction in the differences between people from different countries. With the development of the global supply chain, we have the opportunity to taste and experience cuisines from various regions, wear clothing with exotic styles, and enjoy unique cultural offerings.

Lyndia

In today's era of information explosion, we are confronted with various perspectives and things from different people. Although globalization allows us easy access to cultures and products from all over the world, at the same time, we frequently encounter differing opinions and values in our daily lives. This diversity may lead us to lean towards filtering out information that contradicts our own views and instead, seek to maintain connections with like-minded groups. This process of information filtering and the selection of social circles gradually amplifies the differences between individuals.

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  • From my perspective, the disparities between different people from different countries are narrowing, a viewpoint that aligns with Miles' notion. Additionally, I would further argue that education is playing a crucial role in bringing people from various backgrounds closer. To be specific, education fosters cultural understanding by exposing individuals to diverse perspectives, customs, and traditions. When people learn about other cultures through education, they develop empathy, respect, and appreciation for the uniqueness of each society, leading to a deeper sense of connection and shared humanity. Through education, people learn about diversity and the importance of accepting others regardless of their background. This cultivates a more tolerant and inclusive mindset, reducing prejudices and stereotypes among different cultural groups. For example, with increased access to education, people in China can gain insights into Western cultures, bridging the gap between Chinese and American individuals. Cultural exchange and understanding fostered through education contribute to a more inclusive world where differences are reduced, promoting mutual respect and cooperation.


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