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Recently, there has been a heated debate over whether Artificial Intelligence is harmful to our society. Personally speaking, I hold a positive towards the use of AI. I believe that AI is the wonderful result of human's intelligence so utility of AI just means we are standing on the shoulder of the giant. So there shouldn't anything to worry about since AI provides help for us in various aspects of our life. Take me as an example. After the advent of Chat-gpt, I found it helpful in a lot of scenes. I can ask it for help when I want to collect information about a specific topic without having to spend time gathering and distinguishing information on the Internet. Besides I can also turn to Chat-gpt when I want to translate some articles into Chinese for help. In this way I can get accurate translation very fast. Also I do understand Megan's worry that AI may provide biases or discrimination information. But I think that AI's benefits outweigh its disadvantages and with a responsible way of using it, we can solve this problem.
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Professor

A new story about Artificial Intelligence (AI) is in the news almost every day. And, of course, companies are spending an enormous amount of money to develop new technologies related to AI. Before next class, I want you to consider the following question: Is AI a dangerous technology that, overall, will be harmful to society, or is it a powerful tool that will improve the lives of people?

Megan

Personally, I think AI is a threat to society. As AI technology advances, many jobs may become automated, leaving people without work and that will certainly increase income inequality. Additionally, there’s the risk that AI systems could be programmed with biases or used to discriminate against certain groups. We need to be careful and ensure that AI is developed in an ethical and responsible way. Since we can’t guarantee that right now, I think it is best to slow down when it comes to this kind of technology.

David

I disagree with Megan. I’m of the opinion that AI is a tool for progress. It has the potential to solve many of the world’s problems, from climate change to disease. Additionally, AI can help us make better decisions by analyzing vast amounts of data and identifying patterns that humans may miss. That said, I agree with Megan that we must ensure that AI is developed and used in a responsible way that benefits society as a whole.

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1. E-rater 是ETS在托福考试中真实使用的写作机评系统,具有很高的参考价值。因真实的考试中还有人类评分的环节,因此机器评分不能简单等同于最终的考试分数

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机评分数 参考成绩
5 - 6 25 分以上
3 - 4 18 - 24 分
1 - 2 17 分以下