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证明观点的能力 Development
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文章严重缺乏组织和展开
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针对话题任务有限展开
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针对话题完成时所用的解释、细节没有充分展开
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很好的完成任务
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能够完整描述信息,有效针对话题完成任务,适当的描述细节
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语言组织能力与逻辑 Organization
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细节很少,或根本没有、或不相关或存在很大问题
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结构不太清晰或论点之间联系不充分
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体现基本结构关系,偶尔出现观点联系不清
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总体结构清晰,偶尔没必要的离题,重复
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结构清晰,体现出一致、连贯、递进的特点
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语法与词汇的使用 Use of grammar and vocabulary
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句子结构严重错误,包含其他语言,无意义的符号等
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句子语法上存在大量错误
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造句和选词的不熟悉使得文章缺乏清晰度,偶尔意思含混不清
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语言熟练,能使用不同的句法和词汇,存在次要错误
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能够熟练使用句法,合适的错词与习语
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00:19:50Question 1 of 2
Directions: You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response. Your response will be judged on the basis of the quality of your writing and on how well you response presents the points in the leture and their relationship to the reading passage. Typically, an effective response will be 150 to 225 words.
Summarize the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they challenge the specific arguments presented in the reading passage.
The Salton Sea in California is actually a salty inland lake. The level of salt in the lake's water-what scientists call its salinity-has been increasing steadily for years because the lake's water is evaporating faster than it is being replaced by rainfall or rivers. If the trend continues, the lake's water will soon become so salty that the lake will be unable to support fish and bird populations. The lake would then become essentially a dead zone. Fortunately, there are several ways to reverse the trend that is threatening the lake's health.
One option is direct removal of salt from the lake's water in special desalination facilities. Water from the lake would be pumped into the facilities and heated. This would cause the water to evaporate into steam, while salt and other materials dissolved in the water would be left behind. The steam would then be cooled down and returned to the lake as salt-free water. Gradually, the high salt levels would be reduced and the lake's overall health would be restored.
Another possible solution is to dilute the salt level in the lake with water from the ocean. Since water in the Pacific Ocean is 20 percent less salty than water in the lake, bringing ocean water into the lake would decrease the lake's salinity. The ocean water could be delivered through pipelines or canals.
Yet another solution would be to control the lake's salinity by constructing walls to divide the lake into several sections. In the smaller sections, salinity would be allowed to increase. However, in the main and largest section, salinity would be reduced and controlled by, among other things, directing all the freshwater from small rivers in the area to flow into that main section of the lake.
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