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证明观点的能力 Development
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文章严重缺乏组织和展开
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针对话题任务有限展开
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针对话题完成时所用的解释、细节没有充分展开
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很好的完成任务
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能够完整描述信息,有效针对话题完成任务,适当的描述细节
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语言组织能力与逻辑 Organization
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细节很少,或根本没有、或不相关或存在很大问题
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结构不太清晰或论点之间联系不充分
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体现基本结构关系,偶尔出现观点联系不清
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总体结构清晰,偶尔没必要的离题,重复
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结构清晰,体现出一致、连贯、递进的特点
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语法与词汇的使用 Use of grammar and vocabulary
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句子结构严重错误,包含其他语言,无意义的符号等
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句子语法上存在大量错误
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造句和选词的不熟悉使得文章缺乏清晰度,偶尔意思含混不清
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语言熟练,能使用不同的句法和词汇,存在次要错误
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能够熟练使用句法,合适的错词与习语
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I agree the statement Governments should spend more money in support of the arts than in support of athletics such as state-sponsored Olympic teams. There are several reasons for this.
One of the reason, art represents creativity. So, promotion of art enhances the creativity which enhances the technological developments. Technological development is main pillar for the standard and happy lifestyle. For example, the art of inventing solution for any agriculture problem will helps in better agriculture status of nation.
Another reason, art purifies the state of mind and brings the positivity. So, by promoting art the state of mind of people can be improved by reducing the mental issues or stresses. For example, the song can relax the mind, musical instruments help people to realize inner peace, song can also bring kindness in the people etc.
Also, art is a way of communication. Sometimes it is impossible to explain something to the people or also to each other. But art can illustrate untalkable things, undefinable thoughts etc. For example, if we try to describe alien then most of the people won't understand a thing. But if we show them the imaginary picture, or animation then almost all the people can visualize it. So, by promoting art nation will gain better communication between peoples and also with nations.
Art is also state of representation of perspective. So, promoting art will have to increase the number ideas of people in solving real problems in nation also number of perspectives. For example, one might say the solution to global warming is to not use petroleum products, however other might say that we can use petroleum products but reduces the carbon in atmosphere by promoting forestation.
On the other hand, athletics will have almost no impact on any of developmental tasks other than advertising, featuring and might increase in sales. But these things are minor or insignificant to sustainable and green development. Green development means environment friendly.
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