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In my opinion, I think the AI is a powerful tool that will improve the lives of people. In nowadays, time is the most valuable things, and the AI can provide a lot of support to help us to save times.

For example, when I am living in a hotel, normally the delivery service could help me to save time and have a good rest. But according to the consideration about safety, the meals is to be often placed on the reception of the hotel. At this moment, the AI could give me hand that delivered my meals directly to my room door. That's a little example but it's still show what's the convivence that the AI is brought to us.
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Professor

A new story about Artificial Intelligence (AI) is in the news almost every day. And, of course, companies are spending an enormous amount of money to develop new technologies related to AI. Before next class, I want you to consider the following question: Is AI a dangerous technology that, overall, will be harmful to society, or is it a powerful tool that will improve the lives of people?

Megan

Personally, I think AI is a threat to society. As AI technology advances, many jobs may become automated, leaving people without work and that will certainly increase income inequality. Additionally, there’s the risk that AI systems could be programmed with biases or used to discriminate against certain groups. We need to be careful and ensure that AI is developed in an ethical and responsible way. Since we can’t guarantee that right now, I think it is best to slow down when it comes to this kind of technology.

David

I disagree with Megan. I’m of the opinion that AI is a tool for progress. It has the potential to solve many of the world’s problems, from climate change to disease. Additionally, AI can help us make better decisions by analyzing vast amounts of data and identifying patterns that humans may miss. That said, I agree with Megan that we must ensure that AI is developed and used in a responsible way that benefits society as a whole.

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  • I wholeheartedly believe in the significant benefits of AI. I am fully in agreement with David's perspective that AI holds the promise to help us tackle the vast array of urgent challenges our society faces today. I would also add that AI's capability to automate routine and monotonous tasks can dramatically enhance productivity and foster innovation. By assuming responsibility for these repetitive duties, AI frees up human capital to concentrate on tasks that demand creativity, critical thinking, and complex problem-solving abilities.

     

    The risk of AI systems inheriting or amplifying human biases is a significant concern. However, this challenge also presents an opportunity to consciously design AI systems that are fair, transparent, and accountable. By involving diverse teams in AI development and employing ethical guidelines that prioritize inclusivity, AI can be designed to avoid biases rather than perpetuate them. Rigorous testing and continuous monitoring can further ensure AI systems treat all users equitably.

     

    In summary, AI is a powerful tool that will enhance people's lives.




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1. E-rater 是ETS在托福考试中真实使用的写作机评系统,具有很高的参考价值。因真实的考试中还有人类评分的环节,因此机器评分不能简单等同于最终的考试分数

2. 经过对测试用户写作成绩数据分析,考满分老师为大家提供了 E-rater 与真实考试分数的对应关系,供参考:

原始分数与水平对应关系
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机评分数 参考成绩
5 - 6 25 分以上
3 - 4 18 - 24 分
1 - 2 17 分以下