托福考满分写作练习

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Your professor is teaching a class on business. Write a post responding to the professor`s question. In your response, you should
• express and support your personal opinion
• make a contribution to the discussion in your own words
An effective response will contain at least 100 words.

老师头像 Professor

Today, we’re going to discuss the ways in which companies can impact society. In your opinion, what is the best way for a company to have a positive impact on society?

学生头像 Sarah

I believe that companies should focus on their own operations. While charitable giving can be beneficial, it is a temporary fix that doesn’t address the root causes of serious social and environmental problems. By doing business in more responsible ways, companies can have a more meaningful and lasting impact on society. Not only that, but if they attract positive attention from consumers and increase their profits because of their actions they will inspire other companies to do the same. That’s the only way we can really fix society.

学生头像 John

I disagree with Sarah. While those are very good points, I think that companies should focus on charitable giving and philanthropy. Charitable giving can provide immediate relief to those in need and contribute to the overall well-being of society right away. It could take years or decades for business changes to have a positive impact on society, and most people just can’t wait that long. For instance, donating money to a school can help students learn more effectively almost immediately.

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