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Andrew presents a compelling argument in terms of expense. Admittedly, paying for newest technology will be costly. Nevertheless, I think it has a great deal of advantages of being an early adopter. From my perspective, buying new technology allow us to strengthen our quality of life. In other words, newest technology can improve our life. For instance, last time I have bought a new mobile phone supporting the function of replacing an ID card, which is the key to my dormitory room. With the mobile phone, I can have access to my room even when I forget to bring my card on me, which is really convenient. Though the new product might be expensive, it's worth it. Therefore, I firmly believe that being an early adopter allows us to improve our life quality.
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Doctor Achebe

Today, we are going to discuss how successful software and tech products are launched and marketed. When companies launch and market these products, early adopters are important. Early adopters are customers who tend to buy the latest products and like to be the first to try out new features and processes. In today's discussion, I would like you to describe at least one advantage or disadvantage of being an early adopter. Please explain why you think this way.

Andrew

One obvious disadvantage is that early adopters probably pay a lot more for brand-new technology. When products first come out, they are often quite expensive, but once they've been on the market for a while, the price usually drops. That's why most people wait to buy new technology.

Claire

New tech products might not always be more expensive—sometimes the company will give people a new product at a discount in exchange for trying it out and giving feedback on it. In fact, to me, that's the biggest advantage of being an early adopter—your feedback can guide future improvements to a product. That's a powerful feeling.

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  • From my perspective, a notable drawback of being an early adopter of technology products is the inevitable encounter with bugs and glitches. Initial releases of software and technology gadgets often contain unresolved issues. As a result, early adopters frequently face these challenges firsthand. Dealing with these problems can be frustrating and time-consuming, requiring patience and sometimes technical savvy to navigate or resolve. This aspect of early adoption underscores the trade-off between experiencing the latest technology advancements first and navigating the potential pitfalls of unrefined products. For instance, my cousin Ethan, an avid tech enthusiast, eagerly purchased the latest smartphone model immediately after its release. Excited by the prospect of accessing cutting-edge features, he quickly encountered numerous bugs and glitches that hadn't been identified in testing. From software crashes to battery issues, Ethan spent considerable time contacting customer support and waiting for updates to resolve these problems. His experience exemplifies the challenges early adopters face, balancing the excitement of new technology with the inconvenience of its initial imperfections.


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1. E-rater 是ETS在托福考试中真实使用的写作机评系统,具有很高的参考价值。因真实的考试中还有人类评分的环节,因此机器评分不能简单等同于最终的考试分数

2. 经过对测试用户写作成绩数据分析,考满分老师为大家提供了 E-rater 与真实考试分数的对应关系,供参考:

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机评分数 参考成绩
5 - 6 25 分以上
3 - 4 18 - 24 分
1 - 2 17 分以下